All Comments on 'Mary'

Sorry but just not a decent story there

yet another wimp ass story, im sure there are MORE then anyone cares for here already.

Almost as stupid as the wimp comment below

This stupid trash story is a new low water mark for this site. I don't read interrical stories but because of a few comments I read a little of this one. The writer needs a beer dumped on his or her head, but as thats not possible, I have to say you write garbage.

Admit you're a faggot queer and piss on yourself too. Just LOVED your Nancy Boy story.

...the biggest waste of reading I've ever been subjected to.

That was truly awful writing with nonsensical characters and an unbelievable storyline.

the first night i would have kicked ass...there would have been no second time ...and dr johnson john would have been a neutered nigger ..now as this was written by someone named peg ..i have t ofigure she must be a black slut bitch ...or a black man writing about how racist he is ...with shit like this we will always havew racism in this country ...nigger or whatever or whoever wrote this crap ...if you are white and think a white man would raise a blacks mans bastard ..think again if for whatever reason if a white wife of mine ever had a black kid ...id drive off a cliff swear i had a flat ...i jumped but the wife couldnt get out ...sorry her and the bastard died ....id have a big insurance policy and id be rich and the nigger who done this id have already sued him for everthing he had and would ever have ...whioever wrote this i hope you get aids and die slowly and in great pain ...racial asshole ..THIS STORY IS NOT WORTH READING

Oh my god! This is about the funniest comedy I have ever read. You must have read every interracial story by a white wimp ever written. Then you cobbled together this masterpiece. This was so over the top, it was hilarious. I can't see anyone getting any erotic pleasure from this story, but I do think it should have been in the humor and satire section.

Peg: <p>This story was simply just not a fun read. While cuckoldry is not my thing, I do acknowledge that for some folks, it's what gets them off. But your story was way off the charts. Strap-on, dog collar and leash, cane?? What are you going to go after when this stuff gets old? <p>The scenario you depicted was unintentionally humorous. The idea of a couple comporting themselves as you described would probably be well received as an 'X' rated sitcom. <p>Peg, you really do need an editor. You had a number of errors that made a bad story worse. Example:<i>There was a bell on the back entrance which we rang and was greeted by a young black lady dressed in white.</i> Peg, did you really mean that the Black lady greeted the bell? Because that's what you wrote. And colors denoting racial ethnicity should always be capitalized. You really need to go back to the drawing board before submitting anything further. <p><b>To the asswipe who submitted the comments titled "Pure Shit": you are not only an embarrassment to humanity, you represent a waste of good oxygen with every breath you take.<b>

Peg et.al.: Sorry about "bolding" everyone's remarks. I am infuriated by someone taking pride in his ignorance and bigotry. My apologies.

The husband wanted his wife to be more open sexually but he's too stupid to realize that he's getting less and less sex and his wife is fucking several other guys every week?

That's kind of a big leap from him wanting her to be more open to him accepting wearing a collar and only cleaning up after her lovers.

Are we supposed to believe that anyone is stupid enough not to know what the sounds from the bedroom are?

Are we supposed to believe that a woman that is totally inhibited with her husband, a man she supposedly loves, and then opens up completely to other men? She's even willing to lie to her husband about all of it right from the start.

That's total bullshit. Nobody is that stupid. If there is someone that stupid out there he deserves to end up in that position, but 99.999999% of men would figure it out. They might not mind being a cuckold, but they wouldn't be completely oblivious to it.

You insult the intelligence of the reader when you make a leap like that.

It's like trying to jump the Pacific Ocean on a motorcycle.

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How embarrasingly sad for you as well as upsetting for the most of us.<P>

Learn more what is erotic vs absurdly sick then work on your abilities. Perhaps after graduation.

are we sure he even knows what his cock is for?

Unfortunately a 'vote zero and move on' story.

Enjoyable reading and better than the run of the mill cuckold stories. Amusing how gullible the husband was but that is what made the story even better. Keep on writing.

Why the fuck are you appoliging to any one about anything. You have written no stories, poems ect. Who gives a shit what you think, or if you are offended by comments. This was a horrible mess of a story and this is the only thing that needs an apology. The black thing just takes it one step lower, to the bottem of the septic tank.

Should have been in fetish or possibly interracial. <br> <br> Better yet never been submitted.

Don't listen to the jerks and idiots who love to bash anything that makes them uncomfortable. Your story was great. Keep up the good work.

My best guess is both the husband and wife have a total IQ together of less than 100, with the wife having a slightly larger one say 48. This has to be one of the most stupid pieces of my wife was pimped as a black whore stories I ever read. Hubby of course is to dumb to know she is whored out, that she is a black man's mistress, and she is doing her part to insure that another interracial child is born. No this isnt bigotry just what is in the story. Do you think maybe she has a brother or parent with enough balls to go and blow away the whole group of users with no real vocation that have to whore women to make money? No with an IQ low as hers, dont guess any of her relatives would be any smarter. Ah well, maybe HIV will wipe the whole group out and help clean up the gene pool!

... heard (or read ?) the word "dialogue" some other day ? Know what it means ? No ?

...poorly written, the main characters are despicable, her for lying, cheating and making an even bigger fool of her husband.

As for him...pu-lease!!! can anyone be this gullible, this stupid? What is he? I mean, apart from a being a sap and a wimp...

You DID go thru the effort of writing this story, and I appreciate that, but, I hope that you improve your writing style and make your future characters more plausible and a bit more endearing . Good luck...

Sorry could not resist. It was silly of course but kind of harmless, almost like a collection of all the cliches of the genre...

Sexy but also amusing. Good job.