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Click here"Here they are," he said, fishing Mary's panties out from under the lounge. He handed them to her and she stuffed them into her purse.
Alvin took Mary in his arms and hugged her. They kissed and then turned up the path and walked out of the grove.
- COMMENTS
Comentarista8210 months agoPretty good, although I have to say that I'm shocked Charlotte didn't "cock block" a lot more than she tried to. The grove gathering felt so comfortable with the guitar playing, hearing the peepers (looked them up) and I even discovered a Maine "dictionary," which proved quite helpful--as you truly captured the local flavor in their food and vocabulary.
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Glad to see Di but especially Jennifer accept Mary so readily. It is hard adapting to the "right coast," but everything's falling into place with her acclimation and them accepting her. Well done! 5
Anonymousalmost 2 years agogood, except for the odd "off of". "off" is used by itself in normal english.
grampaaloisiusalmost 4 years agoThank you for this story.
A story I didn‘t expect to read on Literotica.
The first lit-story for me about death, birth control and serious thoughts - so much more than I use to read here.
risgrynsfiskabout 5 years agoExcellent story. And bringing in the sorrowful joy of Neutral Milk Hotel to the mix almost made me cry, imagening the magic of that moment. Must read on, bye bye and thank you.
Emirusabout 6 years agoNot a bad story there Melissa. But I started reading this story yesterday evening and it’s now 2.40am in England and I must get some sleep. But seriously I loved the story. Loved it so much I kept looking for errors just to find fault!! 😂. I’ve been to Massachusetts; New Hampshire and Vermont but never to Maine. But I do live on the coast so it didn’t need much imagination.
Kiwijockabout 6 years agoI love this story not just the people in the story but the description of the landscape makes me able to see it in my mind. Please keep writing
MelissaBabyabout 6 years agoAuthorThere is much more to Mary and Alvin's story. Thank you (all of you) for reading and for commenting. I hope you will stick around for the journey.
NippleWhispererabout 6 years agoI hope you are planning a continuation as there are too many loose ends to this wonderful love story.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoI've been with you from the first on this story MellisaBaby, but this is the first time I've made a comment. Most everyone agrees that your prose flows naturally, but I fear that many times some of your best writing might get overlooked. Like: "He lay his head on Mary's back. He could hear her heart beating. Please don't stop beating he thought. Don't ever stop beating." Call me ol' misty eyes.
