All Comments on 'Mary Jo and Her Ah-Ha Moments'

Huh?

Thank you for your comment. A monolithic community is one in which its members share the same values, think the same way about things. In some locals they are called neighborhoods.In some all the people may pursue the same religion or abide by the same culture or both. Some small rural towns are monolithic.

This was really good, but I think it would be sexier if you touched on some of the grammar. There weren't to many mistakes. Mainly just mixing was with were and vice versa. You spelt done as dome in one paragraph. Like I say, just minor things

Thank you for your comment. I'm getting better at addressing that in later stories. I reread the story several times over several days checking for things and use the grammar checker with every iteration. Somethings still pass through. Sorry about that. I'm pleased that you liked the story.

Well done with much good thought of feelings. Hope there is more to this. Thanks Loved it

Thank you for your comment. There will be more stories with MJ. I'm in the process of restructuring my stories. It will be a couple of months before I return to MJ.

Great story, looking forward to reading more.