All Comments on 'Maryjane, The Submissive'

One of the hottest and sweetest bdsm-incest stories i've ever read, the one problem I noticed a lot of was a lot of basic grammatical and spelling errors, but the hotness of the story in general more than made up for it. loved it

What brought me to this story to start with was her wanting to be like O in the Story Of O. What happened to MJ getting her nipples pierced? Piercing was part of the O story and I waited until the end and she still has virgin nipples. Part 2 maybe?

wow!

Wonder if you and your mom and dad and ruth ever got it on

I was really looking forward to MJ being with the pastor and his wife. there has to be a sequel to this!

...but this is the best damn thing I've read in a long, long time.

Maybe the most erotic story that I've ever read!

Why was there never any sequel or Part 2 to this wonderful story? Like others here, I want MJ doing the Pastor and his wife, in fact the entire church congregation. And more... Good work.

Beautifully written....exellent delivery..and content...perfect

I agree with some of the previous comments. You certainly provided the germ of additional story lines with the pastor and his wife and Carla's bible study group. Maybe even one with Phil's mom (she would be in her 60s now maybe?). Also, while annoying, the lack of editing did not really ruin the story but it would be nice to have a better editor. And, as they say, It's never too late to write a sequel!

This story is so erotic...turns me on every time I read it. Brilliant.

Hello

i love this story, please provide some more, i would like to read mor about MJs life as her parebts sex slave and her further journey as their O