All Comments on 'Mary's Game in the Store Ch. 01'

you need to give us the back story as to how this situation came about. it has potential, however

You need to read the previous stories to understand how she got to this point. I am reading the third set of Mary's stories right now & the progression has been pretty good...

The stories are cut short into small pieces & could have been longer & in less number of installments though.

Overall its a good series, a 4/5 for me. :)