All Comments on 'Mary's Photo Shoot'

Lots about this to admire and enjoy: her apprehensiveness, then acceptance beginning at the interview and echoing in the session, then their growing shared arousal and separate climaxes. Please keep up the good work.

This is a very hot, well written story. It reads well and is not totally predictable as many are here. Please keep writing. You can really spin a story. 5 stars.

Spoilt a little by bad grammar and spelling, and it needs some more work to make it flow better.

Good story! This story walked a fine line and did it well.

Look forward to Steve's & Mary's return to the photo class with intercourse, Alvin asking them before if they would like to have sex with each other in the class.

Also need to have Mary do a similar first time session with another girl her own age or even older, then have Part 3 Steve, Mary & other girl or woman.

Thanks for the story it was great, fantastic build up & spin

Male USA 50+