by marytitor
This story is funny as well as sexy. Hanging for the next bit please.
True enough about Sildenafil - released for ED treatment 1998 - but that doesn’t make the story any less fun. In the real world care must be taken to avoid overdose- but in erotic fantasy such details - as well as ATM or ATP, and the exact location of G-spot, squirting, urolangia - pick your favourite fetish - are easily overlooked.
I just wanted to say how this is a great story and I hope you continue it and hopeful eventually go into how they got married eventually
The cartridge thing was stupid and I hated how the fourth wall was broken.
Also saying someone is better at Nintendo is just a nonsense sentence.
You can say she's better at zelda or Nintendo games, but not just Nintendo. It's a mangled ness
"It was a cold and snowy night and it was the tail end of the first week Mary was living with us." From ch 1 doesn't add up with the Plot in ch 2. It is kind of confusing. Did the parents marry each other one week before the beginning of the Story. And how was he there for her highschool graduation last year. When sie hat 2 years of doing nothing? The Story is cool but these confusing things make it not readible.