All Comments on 'Masculine Magic Ch. 01'

I really liked this tale right up to the point where Bruce suggested that his father taught him how to suck cock. Child abuse / power abuse without informed consent is a big turn off for me. The rest of the writing was great, pity about the yuck factor.

Jake

Incest is disgusting and you didnt finish the story

The previous two commentators are correct: The author spoiled his own story with an incestuous ending. In the many years since his two "Gay Male" stories were published on Lit he has not submitted second chapters to either one, where elaboration and correction would have been welcomed.