by JustJessica
Thanks Jess for a well written, hot story that can help empower us all! Yahoo!
"Slim" style with little superfluous verbage..... great use of vocab that many do not even attempt (or know the meaning of!!).... I didn't see any grammar or spelling mistakes, which in itself warmed me to your talents!! LOL
Enjoyed the progression from "very very shy" to wanton and very, very public "take all" exhibitionist!! Are you going to bring our girl even further out of the closet??
Keep up the writing.....please!!
I don't usually comment but wow. That was one hot story. Thank you for writing something that is so empowering and real. I will be watching for more of your works!
I have read all 8 of your stories, All are provocative well written .
Thanks again for for posting teacher I learned many new word for my vocabulary , made the stories even better .