All Comments on 'Masochistica Concerto Ch. 01'

by warleaf

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zetagirlzetagirlover 10 years ago
Mmmmmm

Like Sarah I am hooked! I will be anxiously awaiting the next installments!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Ohhhh

I would love to be the Doctors next subject

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
overuse.

I believe you overused the word "obsequiously". I saw it at least three times in this selection.

delairiumdelairiumover 6 years ago
Amazing

Love the idea and the story. There were a few holes but overall well written. Would make an amazing nosleep story on Reddit.

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