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All Comments on 'Masquerade'

by RogueTpr

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
too much talk

write small quick paragraph s way too much Tina Stephanie dialogue in halting sentences loses flow of ztory

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Nice effort

Under developed story with potential.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Might be 'first time' for them but PLEASE warn your readers if it is gay/lesbian story, got nothing against it, but does nothing for me and wouldn't have read this had I known. No score.

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