All Comments on 'Mass Effect: Kasumi Goto Ch. 01'

Nice intro. Well written, hopefully the promised sex scenes are as good. Can't wait to see ch. 2,

As a fan of the Mass Effect series, I have to say thank you. This looks like it could be a great series, so....

Chapter 2 ASAP......two thumbs up!!

Nice, everybody from ME2 is there, can't wait to see what you come up with. Hurry please

regardless how many mass effect fans are here i know im one of em this cliffhanger cannot stay for long it begs for a sequel!

My one and only request (NOT a critique). At a few parts it wasn't too clear and that is probably because I've never played this video game. I don't do gaming but I love to read and this is a great story. If you could keep your non-gaming fans in mind it would be greatly appreciated!

Thank you for the encouragement everyone, the next chapter is coming soon, been busy with work and stuff, but getting back to the grindstone. To the non-gamer anon, please keep reading, hopefully even without the game knowledge, you'll enjoy the story. Thanks again to everyone, and while I pretty much have a gameplan for the sex scenes/pairings, let me know who you would like to see hook up, except for Shepard. He is set with Ash, but everyone else is fair game.

Very well written. It flows beautifully. Very anxious to see what will happen next. I am a huge fan of the Mass Effect games and wonder if, since Kasumi is such a tech girl, would be interested in the Shep VI since the Commander is off limits. Plus I know that in the game Chambers could be romanced by the male or female character; that would be interesting. Overall, great job, looking forward to the next chapter.

i guess the sequel isnt being made.