All Comments on 'Massaging the Pussycats'

You know. Fantasies work best when there is some doubt if they are indeed fantasies. This story is so preposterous, there is no doubt. It is also highly predictable and clichéd.

Introduce more of the slutty soccer team, with Jim fucking more of them.

Good stroke story.

Well, I thought that this was a well-paced, well-written piece of sexy fantasy. More would be very much appreciated.....

Your introduction is at complete odds with the rest of the story. You start off saying how he is going to be professional - setting up a story where he is seduced or reluctant to just go at it. But then you have him start and right away he's pushing his finger into a girls ass and fucking her. If you want to write a complete slutty easy fantasy that's fine, but make it internally consistent.

How unprofessional! The author has no concept of a masseuse' training nor the procedures used to give the girls muscular relief. There is no pretense of privacy and no girls, not even female soccer athletes, would be so publicly wanton. I knew the story was weak when he just walked into the dressing room. Something no young girls would allow.... Good premise, poor execution.

It's good enough to me...its not like anyone is getting a Pulitzer for these stories. It's all in good fantasy.

I enjoyed the action but got lost in the middle as to how he was standing / kneeling on the table or what. A bit unrealistic, but the coach did say to give them anything.

I want a massage with that guy!! Who says massage has to be painful. Hehe! Lol

Fun story but favorite part was actually the intro into the locker room. The description of girls in states of undress, wet from recent showers and overall lack of propriety is inspirational for my own fantasies.