All Comments on 'Master and Bitch'

I could have used more meat on the bones of the story but as it is this sets up follow up chapters quite nicely. 4* just bc of length

It was a commission so I had to work against a word count and try to fit a little scenario in 3000 words.

Thank you for the compliment!

I loved it - hope there's more

Really nice beginning. Looking for more.

Hehehe...death by dog-dicking. Got cock? Down you go, no mercy, sorry Dude, now you're reduced to no more than a object capable of rutting. Hiehiehie - and the assumption was that human females are demanding.

'I'm okay. No really! Don't panic, you'll be just fine...now show me them balls. Woof... you pretty thing. No, no don't run! I promise I'll be quick!'

Just for a moment - imagine the trauma-centre.

That was such a cute story! Both characters had me smiling. That was also a vivid description of the change she had to undergo - it was very well orchestrated.

Shot for story!

Personally, not really sure about this concept. What I am sure of is that Step One needed to be straight to the shower to get clean.

An original gem. Not at all what I was expecting, and that’s a great thing. Only thing that would make it better... is the rest of the story. But this was just, wow.