All Comments on 'Master and his Beauty'

by EmmaNichole

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BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakalmost 7 years ago
Too short!

Loved it but it was too short. And what's with "I"? Doesn't make sense??

I glides his now coated finger

I slaps and plays with my breasts

I drop of precum slipping from the slit in his head

I fists my hair, tugging my head back

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 7 years ago
Wonderful story

Masterfully crafted bringing erotic pleasure to my life. Thanks so much for making my morning wonderful.

Alwaystaboo

EmmaNicholeEmmaNicholealmost 7 years agoAuthor
Typos

My apologies to those that have noticed the strange "I" typos... I pieced this together on my phone during my work day, so I am unsure why that kept happening and I can't believe I didn't notice it prior to submitting.

Buffy_kggBuffy_kggalmost 7 years ago
Amazing

A perfect scenario beautifully written - I loved every word.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Love

Beautiful, the odd typos were only slightly distracting :P Wonderful piece

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Literally Breathtaking

An incredibly powerful piece of writing. That left me wanting.

Thank you so much for sharing

Tess (UK)

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