All Comments on 'Master and Servant Ch. 02'

by InoueMegumi

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RikonaRikonaabout 12 years ago

you might need to consider an editor. but besides that its good :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

You REALLY NEED an editor.

InoueMegumiInoueMegumiabout 12 years agoAuthor

Well thanks for the comment. Actually I'm searching for a good editor. And thanks for the advise.

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