by Saint79
I'm giving it 3 stars just because it was way too short!! I'll give it 5 when it's at least 3 pages long
Just like someone already mentioned i cant give it more than 3 because its bearly 1 scene. One glimplse is...
Too short.
Would very much like to return to this when there are like 8-10 chapters but nobody will remind me in a month about it i think and without that i will simply forget.
If people would read the author's note, it does explain why the chapters are so short.
you don't need to update so fast to have a short chapter people can wait longer for a good story if it takes longer to write more then just take some more time to write. cuz I'll wait for this story for sure.
I actually choked up a little from the emotional impact of the story. Much applause to hentaikitten for editing as well.
don't listen to the h8ers who think the chapters are too short :^) I think they're a good length. Also it's p entitled of them to demand longer chapters!!
keep doing u <3