All Comments on 'Master! Master! Pt. 08'

I am really like the story line keep up the good work.

I'm going back to the beginning because I like his snarky sense of humor. Thank you!

I'm really enjoying this story.

If I could suggest a story development... I would point out that animals come "on heat" once or twice a year. What would happen if the girls had a "season" (being extra horny) and subsequently got pregnant ? How would the girls handle it ? How would our hero handle it ? Would the babies be like the mother or the father or a hybrid of both ?

A newspaper expose after the girls, or Lorraine's guys, are found out by the local populace could lead to a media frenzy, religious nuts claiming they are the devil's spawn and the end of the world is occurring. However, it also opens up a line of contact for other people who have had pets change. The meeting and interplay of the Masters and pets would be interesting.

The idea of them coming into heat once a year when they can get pregnant sounds quite reasonable, however, I hope it doesn't happen until much later when the situation has stabilized & the children would be safe.

In the meantime, I'm thrilled that humor is returning. Steve is hysterical. I want to vote for a Jack Russel terrier transforming; I think they would make a funny person, or maybe that border collie? Please, no Chihuahuas! It's wild that Betty goes against the stereotype of the sweet, placid dairy cow. I'm a little concerned about Lorraine's sense of humor under the influence of alcohol. Partying with her might become hazardous to one's dignity.

BTW, what is his name? He tells the girls to use it around other people but do they know what it is? Here he says he gives his name but only mentions the girls' names specifically. Just curious since I don't remember it in any previous chapters.

after the story progresses a little more the idea of them bieng in heat is a very good one you can make and they don't have to become pregnant from it. and another cool idea would be to not just make it the usual pets that transform but a really different one to come in ( centaur, harpy, turtle) or something that is different and could be a unusual addition to the group a centaur so that lets say later on in the story during a emergency he could ride her to the rescue or smthn and same with the harpy. just get a girl that could help out in the story in that sense later on

I wish it was me with betty for their first time instead of him. It was one hot chapter.

nasty chapter filled with femdom and the main guy suddenly being a submissive bitch, not in line with how the story has been going and did not appreciate it suddenly being sprung on me.

Not a big boob fan. More than a handful is a waste.

I thoroughly enjoyed your story up until this chapter.

I don't know if this is where you planned it to go all along, or if you just somehow ended up here, but this went from something I loved to read, to something I had to force myself to finish. You completely switched how the main character is perceived, and this introduction of Betty and Lorraine, I feel, has no place in where your story was going.

Reading the comments from the next few chapters, it seems that I'll let the story end here and save myself the disappointment. Thanks for the story thus far, hope to see more like it.

As I didn't get the Jojo reference, either. Although I do at least know the name, I've never read the manga or watched the anime.

Desperate is good if it keeps you putting out stories like this

My vertebrae were damaged by that whiplash. Not cool

Story has taken a nose dive. My extreme hatred for bullies aside, you've done a complete 180 with the character and the story

Your story is rather captivating please keep up the good work!

Went from simple silly fun to massive insecurity triggers in a single chapter. Thanks for that.

[22.09.22]

'Kungillingus Fu' = AWESOME!

I am really enjoying how the story is progressing and the humour is top notch!

11/10 for the series so far!!!!!

This is the end of the story. The rest is trash.

[06.08.23]

Something like my 3rd re-read!

Looove this:

"The first one, I would say is a blond, but that wouldn't be right since he didn't actually have hair. Instead, he had a big pompadour of yellow feathers growing out of his scalp. Give him some sunglasses and he'd be a perfect Johnny Bravo."

Grrrreat 90's callback!

11/10 Pairs of Shades!!!!!

So now he gets A Cow Wow.

[25.04.24]

This is too funny:

It should be mentioned that here in Maine, the whitest state in the country, the average skin tone is 'Starbucks cup'. If you give a Maine girl a bukkake, it looks like she just went running and is soaked in sweat. Meeting a black person up here is like finding a unicorn.

11/10!!!!!