All Comments on 'Master! Master! Pt. 12'

by Sage_of_the_Forlorn_Path

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
This is

Just getting more and more erotic/fun for each chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
The plot thickens!

I'm very much looking forward to when the zoo animals get placed into the house. I really want to see how things go with the lioness. This story is great.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Pretty good job so far!

Anofher great chapter as always, though you did have a typo somewhere on page 2.

Darkwater48Darkwater48about 6 years ago
Good story

Really can't wait to see what's causing it. A little too much sex for me but I like the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
yees my haw

can't wait for the hentai adaptation

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Binge worthy.

I've binged this whole series over the period of a day, I love the character building you've set up. Even if you end the series in a few chapters there's still so much you can do with the premise you've set.

Thanks for the interesting read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Finished another chapter

Keep it up

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

[22.09.22]

As a recovering Roman Catholic, this cracks me up!

The mansion driveway was gravel, but a very high-quality gravel, pure stone of all the same mineral with no sand or dirt visible. An old-school Irish nun would look at it and fantasize of all the children she'd force to kneel as punishment for some minor offense.

S?:>}

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You have created a fascinating story. I have no idea what direction this story should go. I know I have to finish it now, if just to see how good you are. Master indeed...

skippersdadskippersdad4 months ago

I am still reading.

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