All Comments on 'Master of Fire Ch. 02'

how much more can Ember take and who heard her scream for help?

bring on ch 3

I love this. However, if I may, can you maybe lengthen the chapters a little more, I get so into it and I get sad when it ends. Love the idea! Please don't make us wait too long.

Thanks for the encouragement and advice - I made the next chapters much longer!

But what is missing is textures and smells. It would make it come alive. For exampel, what does his dick taste like? Is it smooth, hard, slippery? When he is forcing her to deepthroat, does his pubic hairs tickle her nose or chin, does he have pubic hairs? Details would make it even better. Keep writing!