All Comments on 'Master of Sins Ch. 06'

We know the characters better now they still need fleshing out - perhaps not (Maggie) .

We do need the chapters to come faster

While I would prefer chapters to come out fast paced. I by far prefer quality over quantity. You feel free to write how you want as offer as you want and what you want. As FREE readers we have no command over you. You are the author and you determine what is written. There are going to be those that are impatient and critical of your writing. But stick to what you want to write and how you want to write it and the chapters Wil flow more easily. Of course we all have preferences but we can chose to read or not just as you chose to write or not. Writing well takes time and I am hooked on this story so I would say you are off to a good start. I only suggest that you stick to an end goal and work your way there. Plot twists will not be unwelcome. Have fun with your writing.