by RaycerEdge
THAT WAS SO INTOXICATING YOU HAVE TO REFIL MY GLASS WITH ANOTHER AND DONT BE STINGY EITHER
FURTHER THIS EPIC
Great story, though I think you lost track of past and oresent with the charity ball. Great build up but then an almost rushed finish. The story itself was great just needed a longer sex scene in my opinion, good job though.
great storie but you should finish weather she got pregnant or not and if she ended up living with her Grandfather. But I will give you a B+ on the story
I would have liked to see what’s next. How do they keep their relationship going? Does he still play the field? How does she deal with the jealousy?
Great story. Lovely scene at the end. Would love for you to continue the story. Does she end up moving in with her grandfather becoming his live in lover?