All Comments on 'Master of the Hunt'

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lisette4lisette4over 13 years ago
Hot!

That story was HOT and quite a turn on for me. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great

THAT WAS SO INTOXICATING YOU HAVE TO REFIL MY GLASS WITH ANOTHER AND DONT BE STINGY EITHER

FURTHER THIS EPIC

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
All build up, and then quick finish...

Great story, though I think you lost track of past and oresent with the charity ball. Great build up but then an almost rushed finish. The story itself was great just needed a longer sex scene in my opinion, good job though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
did she get inseminated

great storie but you should finish weather she got pregnant or not and if she ended up living with her Grandfather. But I will give you a B+ on the story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Keep it going

I would have liked to see what’s next. How do they keep their relationship going? Does he still play the field? How does she deal with the jealousy?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Nice story. Do please continue

Great story. Lovely scene at the end. Would love for you to continue the story. Does she end up moving in with her grandfather becoming his live in lover?

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