All Comments on 'Master Swordswoman Pt. 01'

by PhillippaT

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mechmanasmechmanasabout 15 years ago
Great Start

This is a Great Start to what looks like a good story

JammyJimmyJammyJimmyabout 15 years ago
Nice opener!

I like it... I like the level of detail that you're bringing in about the community and the land it's located in, and the hopes and fears of the main character are coming along nicely. Keep writing, and I'll be delighted to keep reading. Five stars!

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