All Comments on 'Master Swordswoman Pt. 10'

by PhillippaT

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mph5mphmph5mphabout 11 years ago
Your plot died

Actually it didn't die, more like you decided against having one. read through what you have and you will notice that the plot direction is headed away from her being a master swordswoman. really it seems like it was forgotten in the last five chapters, which is a shame because i felt it had a lot of potential.

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