All Comments on 'Masters of the Arches Ch. 23'

I have been waiting for you to finish this story for a very long time, thanks :)

A great story. Hope you return to this world.

Great story thanks.

I enjoyed your story very much.....great details...thanks luv.

Unfortunately this story has not got any sequel.............

Absolutely first class storytelling. This must not be the only one. I thoroughly enjoyed every moment of my reading. The only criticism that I can make is that it would have benefited from somebody proof reading it. There were many spelling mistakes that interrupted the smooth flow of the story. Apart from this it was truly wonderful.

brilliant story, would love a sequel 5*

Agree with the other comment would be nice a sequel.

Great story and extremely well written. Would like to see more like it!

You had me groaning, moaning, smiling and on the edge with some sleep deprivation. Read everything, but couldn't make myself stop and comment, till now tho I did rate every chapter 5 stars.... I LOVED IT ALL!!!! (If you were to write more on it, I'd come back and read it all over again)

You have an amazing imagination. Thanks for a terrific story.

what a story....dazed and awed

What a story...wow

I enjoyed your story very much, but found the ending a little soft. Its hard to imagin that two super human computers would fall for such a weak ploy. Please keep wrighting and I will watch for more of your stories. Old biker.

Great story, but the ending leaves to many questions unanswered.

I read most of this story on the "other site" years ago, (where for some reason only Chapters 1-21 are displayed.....), and was delighted to have found it's conclusion. I must agree with the previous comment about the ending but on the whole, a worthy effort.

And a happy conclusion, although it was a little anticlimactic LOL. I hope Vince and his wives get back safely.

Loved the story, hated the ending.

not much, but i never got past the sixth paragraph. lost the ring of truth. lost my interest. (A) in a democratic country you are innocent until proven guilty. because you owned the company does not prove you had anything to do with or knowledge of transporting/importing drugs. Direct involvement must be proven.(B) law enforcement would never even attempt an arrest on an owner just because he was the owner. come on man keep your stories honest with what you wright

entertaining and easy to get into, but for an distracting and aggravating repetitive habit.. over use and 90% of use not needed the "of course" and "all of a sudden" an edit would have removed and improved.