All Comments on 'Match Met Ch. 02'

A little closer editing needed, but still a five.

Yes this story has definitely gone off the boíl. . YES the wolf needed to be taken down a peg or two but now he's mainly a groveling puppy hoping for a scrap of Kiana's attention. On the positive side , the TLC Kiara selflessly doles out to disabled father story added deph, if not heat to the story.

Well maybe the author pull a plot twist to give Sawyer his nuts back,but I'm not smart enough to see how. To all appearances, the stallion seems to have gelded and the whip has been welded to Kiara's hand.( the one that's not balancing the serving tray ) .

4 1/2

my new fav story

Kiana need to stop playing, being prideful is going to cause her to lose out. Sawyer was man enough to realize his mistake and apologized. Her jealousy should prove she wants Sawyer.

sawyer should bring in another woman and this one shouldn't be his sister. needs editing/proofing, but i look forward to reading your story.

Post more ASAP!!!

She's being too hard on him and it's getting annoying. Her attitude was totally understandable in the first chapter but I felt in this one she could have given him a break since it's quite obvious he's trying to make up for his poor behavior.

Anyway it sucks to see that there isn't a chapter 3 yet... update soon!

Just wow!!! You need to be putting up a chapter every day :D

The first half of this story detailing Kiana's situation with her father was incredibly touching. it adds so much depth to her and makes me understand why she wouldn't want to put up with Sawyer's bullshit. I hope you keep her strong and strong-willed. I am already addicted!!

first impressions cout A LOT people. I totally understand Kiana's POV. As much as he tried to woo her with the flowers and what not, his behavior in the bathroom was still arrogant as hell. If it were me in that situation, I would still be weary and wondering if he wasn't just trying different tactics to "conquer" me and simply get into my pants. In real life, guys like Sawyer enjoy playing hurtful little games and are GREAT actors. Like chameleons they adapt to what they think the girl will respond to...

Oh man, your story is really good! I knew she would change her mind about Sawyer. I think she needs to give him a chance, he is trying to make up for being an *ss earlier on! Please post soon :-)

I love how Kiana is playing hard to get in this cat and mouse game they have going on with each other. And so refreshing to read a female lead character who has a backbone with brains and don't fall in the lap of the lead male character as soon as he says "hi" or do a romantic gesture because that gets boring after awhile. So good for Kiana for making him work for it...lol Great story and can't wait to see where this goes so keep up the good work. And Sawyer reads as yummy as hell!

This is REALLY good. Please don't keep us waiting too long!

I got a little choked up. Awesome job I'm hooked

More chapters, please.

Happy Thanksgiving! Gosh, this is a really good story. I hate to ask, but goodness, can you update again before the week is out. I know, I know. I like the fact that Kiana is putting Sawyer off even though she is attracted to him. Sawyer seems like an okay dude, but based on his character he seems used to getting any and everything he wants. When he brought his sister with him to where Kiana works, he was playing a game. He is literally pulling at straws trying to get Kiana to react to his advances. Little does he know Kiana is pulling at straws trying not to react to his advances. I cannot wait for more!

It seems like Kiana is at her wits end, with the cards she's been dealt in life... so of course she's going to have her guard up. She's strong willed and stubborn and that's not always pretty but it is very real. It also makes sense that she would be so resistant to him since she's probably used to getting grief for being a Hooters girl specially with such an arrogant guy. But I look forward to see how these 2 battle it out. Great update!

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Yes, I'm hooked too! Can't wait to see where this goes...

My mom died before my dad, and he also had a stroke that changed him. He died this July. I can really relate to Kiana.

I love reading stories where the lead female has a backbone. I do think Kiana could be a little nicer though. Hopefully Sawyer doesn't believe what she said in the bathroom.

It shows she has a backbone and self-respect. If he wants to be with her, he needs to prove he's worthy. Can he treat her right? Can he be a nice person, instead of the jerk he keeps showing he is? He seems to be beginning an attitude adjustment, which is good... but he needs to keep it up to win her over. Persistence will be his friend. Looking forward to more.

It's great to read another story where the lead it's strong, smart, sexy, and has a real backbone as the other readers commented aptly. It's refreshing that a young lady like Kiana written as having a fantastic physical features, but had depth to her. Seems like you've found the perfect way of developing characters where just because a woman is sexy, fit, and beautiful, she can also have heart, standards, and depth. Thank you for not making her bitter because of her life, but purposeful and responsible in her education and other life goals. I'm looking forward to reading more of this story. Sawyer reminds me of sexy, wise cracking Clay Matthews of the Packers. Sawyer come off as a jerk during the fussy meeting, but I think he's gonna turn it around and grow from this experience faking for Kiana. Keep up the great work.

Please. Yes she has backbone and self respect but it's been over a month and she obviously likes the guy. Not to mention what he did wasn't that serious. She doesn't have to give him a second chance, but she's just being b*tchy now and immature. Either tell the guy in a believable way she doesn't him or be a strong woman and admit to herself and him that she does.

No body has the Right to treat a waitress the way this Sawyer is doing! I made it to page 2 of Chapter 2....Sorry but I can Not go any farther.