All Comments on 'Mate Ch. 02'

I have grown enough today, now it is regression time.

For that line alone, you get a 5.

Whatever you are smoking, is is very orange.

I. Loved. It. Prussian green with overtones of Turner's yellow. That'll be a 5 then lol!

More please!!

It was suggested by the site... in case you (the author) didn't know.

Clever plotting to allow deep use of metaphor.

However - I would also be fine if it ended right here.

Going forward, you'd have to deal with the dysfunctional issues you've written into your protagonists.

And... you could also post it in First Time.

Green-something

In the late 60's, an article in Eye magazine about musician Janis Ian stated how she often described the sound she wanted from her band in colors. While I had never considered such a thing before, it seemed logical to me. Now, five decades later, it still makes perfect sense. Great story. Five stars. Is it over? Or is there more?

Royal Purple. Very deep Royal Purple. Smells like hot cottage dill bread.......