by risgrynsfisk
This was absolutely priceless! Enjoyed every moment and didn't feel the need to skip a single word. If I could give more than 5 star I would have. Keep up the good work!
Peter is amazing! The line "more -ian then Christ-" is amazing! I laughed so much I nearly peed myself! Can't wait for more.
I will add to the comments of your adoring fans. You truly have a way with words and it is nice to read something different than the typical stories posted here. I must admit though that I only read the story because of the high ratings from others. When you posted the first part, i read the first paragraph and thought it was in the wrong category. It did not grab my attention.
Loved this and some of your expressions are priceless! Probably my favorite story ever here! I too never got past the first few paragraphs the first time I looked at it!
Absolutely loved this series- so unique and delightful and heartwarming and orange! The racist floor made me laugh out loud and I'm glad you schooled it with the Syrian refugees :)
for language. The story sparkles with it, as does your other one. It is obvious that English is not your first language, not because of any mistakes, but because of the way you find phrases a native speaker would never think of. Beautiful!
Corduroy. Deep green velvet. Weeping willow trees grazed off at 'cow height'......