by JolliTheApple
Please continue. Your doing a fantastic job. I would love to finish reading this story : )
Your story is wonderful. Characters well fleshed out so you care about them. Not just sex for sex`s sake. The only criticism I can offer is that you should have someone check spelling and grammar as these mistakes pull you from the story trying to figure out what you meant to say. Keep up the good work
It is my hope that you continue this tale. I have become WAAAAY to involved with these characters and wish to see it played out. As stated previously it is the tale and not sex for sex sake....I want to learn about the older brother and what other secrets Manu has hidden.
This was a very interesting read! Sex but not overwhelming. I really like your plot and can't wait to read more!