All Comments on 'Mating Rituals Ch. 10'

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JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 7 years ago

I can't wait for you to give us more of this story!! I have been reading ALL of the chapters as quickly as I dared and can't wait for more! Please keep writing!!

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakover 7 years ago
Love it!!!

So glad you intend on more chapters. I was disappointed to find out that you were making Al infertile. After all the heartbreak that Cherie has been through I was really hoping that not only would he be able to get her pregnant but have twins just to prove that the illness that Al had as a child didn't render him infertile. Also hoping that 3rd bedroom turns out to be a playroom that Bel and Lance can enjoy too. Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Incest

For her father to make her pregnant can lead to heredity problems, it is unacceptable in society as the problems may not appear until the fourth generation and the be devastating for the family concerned, and then keep appearing in future generations.

The MESSAGE IS DON:T TRY THIS METHOD>

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

What happened to Lance's vasectomy from chapter 1?

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