All Comments on 'Mating Rituals Ch. 11'

Not bad but... seriously, the end is... blaugh.

OMGosh!! Loved the whole thing except the ending. I was really hoping she was having twins since it was emphasized by Bel that twins run in the family. Wasn't expecting the baby to have died. :'( Please don't make us wait long before the next chapter. BTW, LOVE the long chapters!!!

Ok, I want directions to this commune cuz I'm definitely moving in too!!! I loved the long chapter (please make them all long like this one) but I hated the ending. I was expecting her to find out she was having twins since Bel made comment about them running in the family but not that the baby would have died. Please don't make us wait for the next chapter. 5 stars only because I couldn't give it more.

of course the sex and openess of the couples is wonderful i am really engaged in the story line, well written, well paced