by davsimmons37
Next part please. I enjoyed this so far.
Awesome build up. Believable. Please to release next installment.
You can't leave us hanging like this man.
Write more.
Where's the rest??
You gotta continue, brilliant work so far, improving with every chapter
Hope you continue the story, really enjoying it so far.
I like the ramp up to full on intercourse. Glad it's happening soon!