by edrider73
Another god awful, unbelievable story. How about those guys gave both of them aids? Of course there are never any consequences in your stories. How about the husband gets up and goes to the hospital because no matter how much lube she used, his ass was torn so badly it required surgery. So the hospital people called the Police, they took swabs of his ass and pumped his stomach and took more samples. Then the women and the men went to jail for kidnapping, illegal restraint, assault, battery, rape and a number of other crimes. I'm sure one of the women turned States evidence in order to get a lighter sentence. So he divorced his crazy wife and kept all the assets as she spent a minimum of 12 years in jail. How's this pile of crap story working for you now Ed? I will give you credit for one thing. You have managed to piss off practically every single person that has had the misfortune to read any of your stories. I guess that's an achievement.
just wont follow up with the divorce plan, TK U MLJ LV NV
Same 1 star. Your writing is actually not bad. Better than most. Too bad it's wasted.
See a therapist and spend some time jobhunting. Unemployment and depression are a dangerous combination and it beats dying in a pool of your own filth.
I actually enjoyed this. But my sexuality is kinda sick and twisted.
Ed you are one sick puppy. Please stop, and please don't reproduce. Stop.
I can't imagine anyone finding this author's stories erotic. I don't like trashing authors, so I won't do it to this author. All I will say is that of all the authors on this site, I find this author's stories the LEAST enjoyable.
Because he divorced her and took most of the assets. You see the stupid bitch made a video of her having him raped. Well he used that video at the divorce trial. He made out like a bandit and never spoke to her ever again. Why people think it's smart or clever to take pictures or make videos during the commission of a crime I'll never understand. Even in fiction it's just plain stupid. And that's what this story was - STUPID!
Great short story. keep up the good work.
And to all other commenter´s that are sooo butthurt over this. Get out of this section.
Or are you lot too busy reading about women getting raped? Hypocrisy ftw.. idiots.
Why would a man stay with a woman that pays to have him raped? Why wouldn't he take the video and have her put in jail? Even for fiction, this makes no sense. No stars.
Because there is no other possible ending. Of course there never is an ending to any of Edrider's stories are there?
Applied to Madge :
"There once was a girl named Alice,
who used a dynamite stick as a phallice
They found her vagina,
in South Carolina,
and bits of her tits in Dallas."
He is insane and needs help!!! That author has to be the biggest idiot on world!!!
She cheated on him in his presence and he is forced to suck the sperm of her lover out of her arse?! You are only stupid when you think thats going to happen!!! Divorce and the law will be informed against the perpetrators!!
take in the woods butt rape her and kill her.....its the only solution awful story
Then find and KILL all those involved with her plans, including her.
Any man in his right mind divorces her. Any decent lawyer gets her sent to prison.
More shit isnt possible!! Only a real idiot will beliebe that a marriage like that will exist!
Maybe that that author needs real mental help!!! So if anyone has contact to him, help him!!!
Moronic worthless bullshit.
People lose their lives over things like this. I hope ed has lost his.
At the very least he's going to divorce her. At the very best he sells her to some Mexican whore house. When you write such vile and contemptible stories and you never consider the fallout, the stories become worthless. Do you really think he'd stay married to the cunt? How hard would it have been to throw in another 1/2 page wherein he throws her out? Stupid beyond all reasonable expectations.
Both more stupid and vastly more disgusting for having read this. Too bad I can't give less than 1*, because I would.
But that's about all I can that's positive.
The thing is that the guy that fucked his ass was committing rape. The wife could have also been charged as an accessory.
The story seemed nonsensical after that. Why didn't the husband leave his wife after.
I've read a lot of stories by this author, and this fits in with them. The premise is more than a little weird, and I can't believe that it would ever happen in real life (but 'never say never'.)
On the other hand it is consistent within itself. And I have known people that are pale imitations of the wife - they go on and on trying to convince someone that yes they do like something or would do something etc. Just not to the degree of forcing them and putting it on a DVD.
I like this story, regardless of the subject matter and believability, it's well written and entertaining and brought a smile to my face once it was done and over. 5*
How stupid is it to make a video of yourself committing multiple crimes? He simply has the police arrest his wife, they take the videos for evidence, arrest everyone else involved and go to Court. In order to avoid excessive jail time for themselves everyone there testifies against his wife. She goes to prison, he gets a divorce and gets to keep all the marital assets since his wife has been convicted of multiple felonies. Her idea that he would believe anything she says going forward after she ass rapes him was just stupid. The end to a really poorly thought out story.
No stars as even giving this crap one star would be an insult to the star.
So how come she got to take the smaller cock huh? He wasn't even willing...