All Comments on 'Matt's Cousin Ch. 03'

It was getting real good and then you stop before anything more happen. You need to at least do one more chapter Having Matt learn they aren't cousins. So I hope you at least do that. Leaving like you did makes me wanting at least one more chapter and hope you write it.

Great story ! It would be even greater if you would write at least one more chapter. In this new chapter, Matt would find out they are not blood related!!

GreAt story TrAce! Really erotic and believable!! Keep writing!

One more chapter! Leaving it like this is just criminal.

You absolutely can't leave it hanging like that! There's a real romance brewing here; let it be finally realized. Agreed with previous poster, that cliffhanger-esque ending is criminal! Please write one more chapter, this is too good not to give a proper ending to it.

A number of readers would like to see this story continued. Unfortunately, I have nothing further written and have no good ideas in mind. If you would like to see it continued, I'll need some suggestions. Please post any that you have here.

i usually don't like an ending that hangs like that, but in this case it works pretty well. It leaves a lot of interesting details to the readers imagination. Another chapter would be difficult since your losing the taboo side of it. Of course only the girl knows the truth now. She could let him believe the cousin thing and toy with him.

Im glad jarvis was written out of this chapter tho. including him here i think would have been a negative factor. And this was definitely the best best chapter yet.

maybe she can seduce him and temp him then right before it gets serious she revels the truth or maybe afterwards ;)

chapter. You could have them practice again and when they can't stop she can tell him they're not cousins. Perhaps have the aunt coach them and show her how to give head. They could invite the aunt into bed with them as a thank you for teaching them.

All of them are good keep them cuming

you need to keep this one going to another chapter or 2 you just left it hanging

Whaaaaat?! You cant just leave it there. We need to know about how Matt reacts and how they go about it ... :(

But a damn poor ending.

The story is well worth the 5 stars, but the missing ending isn't worth a single star.

You might want to re-write the last page here - there is a whole section covering the next few hours that is missing.............

It was good but needs a better ending.

It leaves an air of suspense! And it's not like we don't know what was going to happen :).

All that build up then nothing. What a disappointment. Wasted my time.

PLEASE finish the story. We need to know what happens next. Do they stay as a couple?

It took you way too long to get to "nowhere"... the last page was the only good part of the story....