All Comments on 'Mature Molly'

Your story starts out rather promising, but moves much too quickly to have a sense of reality to it. Of course this is fantasy, but developing the situation a bit further will help to draw the reader in. The professor seems to go from threatening to call the police to stroking the guy's cock in about 30 seconds. I got the sense you were in a rush to "get to the good stuff."

, ore build up

Expand your stories to include more than one scenario, You are a talented writer and we need your work

should be under non-consensual, since she blackmail's him into what she wants.

Mechanical, totally non sexual and boring.