by fannyrat
five stars.
I wish you cold write more stories like this one. Two people who love each other.
this was a good story but it would have been better if written as 2 parts from his point of view and then her point of view.
I liked the direction and plot but changing from one view to the other so erratically made my head spin. One page was too much.
Thank you for this series. The characters are believable and the sex is graphic and hot. Glad to see you have continued it.
The back and forth of the origin of comments seemed fresh.
Seemed to make my mind keep track. By the end of the story it was worn out. Less novelty more distraction.
Still a good start.
A good story but longer than I like. Also, some grammar issues; you should have someone proof read for you.
I would rather have seen her leave him at the altar after seeing the 2 guys he used as pawns to abuse her at the wedding amongst his friends.
It fell apart. Sorry just took a turn for the worst.
I love blackmail stories, and you nailed it. Love the older woman, young guy theme. Great ending too. RT
I agree with anonymous. A fabulous story through the blackmail and the lovemaking. The ending seemed a bit contrived. At that point the story moved too fast, with no buildup or development. It was as if the author was in a hurry to finish.
The blackmail part was good, had a lot of potential. But the ending spoiled the story. Why had she to be so prudish, so true to her late husband's morals? Why had he such a change of heart? Couldn't this be hot blackmail story with no guilts, no moral issues? Just a true jack-off tale?