All Comments on 'Maui Girl and the Elevator'

My only other comment is proof-read.

Please write more!

Lol... you did great I love how you tried to get the "pidgen" accent it was a great story

I hope you plan to write more..

Lol also gotta love us crazy tita Hawai'i wahines.

First to anonymous ... thanks for the encouragement ... and I see what you mean about the proof-reading ... auwe!

To Sola ... glad you liked it. I'm a Maui boy but it's been years since I've been home. In my day titas ruled. I have a feeling that hasn't changed much.