All Comments on 'Maus Learns to Roar'

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dreamer3366dreamer3366over 6 years ago

Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Thank you.

Northpacific2017Northpacific2017over 6 years ago
Very Enjoyable

Thank You for sharing, and your hard work turning out this delightful piece .

NorthPacific

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Nice writing but

A bit of an anatomy lesson: the second sphincter is just a half inch inside the first. Check on yourself In the shower. The cervix is unlikely to be touchable by the thumb. I guess it's possible in an abnormal situation. Very long thumb or very short vagina.

But I like your writing!

Anonymous
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