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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
So what?

I'm sorry but this really is a "So what?" story. There is practically no plot, no drama, no characterisation and no climax. I've given you two stars for trying but you've got a long way to go before you can start to think of yourself as a writer.

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