All Comments on 'Maya - The Novel'

It was one of the most beautiful and touching stories,I've ever read, about a pair of truly beautiful people. It really felt like they were made for each other. But after reading about them falling in love I can't help but think about all of the unnecessary pain some people like Maya have to go through to be themselves. How terrible that is, that they often have to loose their entire families in order to just be happy. It's like people closest to you, the ones you grew up with just suddenly don't want to have anything to do with you, just because you happen to fall in love with someone of the same sex. I don't get it, why does it matter man or a woman, we all just want to be happy...

You are so brilliant, your stories are beautiful! All of your stories gives a girl hope. Thank you for sharing!

Another one of your great stories.

To say, except...

Thank you.

Fabulous! Thank you!

Amazing story as usual. Keep them up.

Another great story, as usual. You're writing is so heartwarming and real. Can't wait for the next story!

It was alright, except a little to long for me to read it all the way through, sorry but it was good the first 6 pages anyway

I love happy endings. It warms my heart. Great Story! I am also happy to hear Alex was in this story, what great fun. Two happy couples

This is one of the most enjoyable, heartfelt & loving stories I have read on this site in a long while! Your characters felt very real, had true personalities & you developed an engaging story with lots of juicy, hot scenes to keep things flowing. Please continue posting more!!

Best story ever

It was great makes me feel less wierd for being a les

You don't do enough to differentiate your narrators so if you read this right after Alex, Gray comes off like a gangbanging school marm because she speaks with what is basically the same voice as Cady.

I cannot praise this enough. It's as simple as that.

It was such an awesome read and the chemistry between the character, beautiful!

I've really enjoyed the Alex and Maya stories. Can't wait for Charm as she seems to have had a pretty rough deal so far the poor thing.

I am in love with these characters, so much depth to them! I just want to adopt them all and take care of them. Tears and laughter and joy; the roller coaster that these novels took me through!

Beautifully done. Perfection.

Agonisingly gets you so involved, shit, I'm seventy six and not much will bring a tear to my eye but you just did!

Don't understand the poster who suggested it was too long, could have gone on forever for me and I wouldn't have complained.

This brought tears to my eyes... and laughter too. :)

The crossovers, the flashbacks all made me enjoy their stories more.

Thank you!

I just binge-read Eva, Alex, and Maya, in all their versions. The binge-reading thing says that I enjoyed them.

I was helped in having a sense of the butch aspect by "Below Her Mouth," which is now on Netflix.

Thanks.

I've binge read and couldn't stop even though it got me to 4:30 a.m! Thankyou for this moving and beutifully written story. I cried a bunch but it was worth it. My favorite no doubt

.......... and well deserving of the full 5 star rating.

Well written, easy to follow and believable characters but with interesting sub plots.

Thank you .

I remembered this site existed at like 4 this morning because insomnia, binge read Eva, then Alex and then the teaser for Maya made me come and devour this one as well! Though, with your setup here, I feel like there should be another one from either Ash or Charm's point of view. This universe you've created is fantastic, and I could read your works for ages and not get sick of them!

Do you know how many sleepless night I got because I couldn't wait to continue reading it tomorrow?! That's how wonderful your story is!! I was shock with Maya being engage and I was angry in the moment, I understand what Gray have felt but the most amazing thing that happen was Gray accepted everything, she didn't hold on to that hate, cheating, etc that would lead to break up and much worst Maya attempt to suicide again. If they ended up like that I can see that Maya will try to attempt it all over again especially when she is married to that lawyer guy. I'm so happy that you have given my babies a truly and inspiring ending where they help each other to heal, to give space, to understand, to forgive and what's more is to cherish one another. Of course, who wouldn't fell in love when a gurl said "Let me take care of you" that would be a major bomb for me.

No words can describe how amazing and talented you are!! You have created this world, this characters that made me go crazy and cost my tears!! Plus I never get bored reading it and I just hope to read my babies, Maya and Gray Weeding day!! or my another babies Alex and Cady Weeding day!! Thank you so much for that story!!

A lovely story. Well written, good use of language, with some interesting storylines. Left us hanging with Ash, theres another story. Thank you for writing ans for sharing!

If I could, I'd give it 6 stars! The story drew me in and kept me riveted all the way through. Thank you!

Im speechless ..... This is hard to comment because my words will pale compared to your talent ..... This story was a marvelous add to Alex's story with cady in singapore ..... I took me time until the penny dropped ..... And then what a tale .....the first 6 pages pure love fun live happiness, my heart made flip flops ....... But after sunshine there is a bit rain sometimes and this was a tropical tornado with peaks like the hospital event, that gave me nearly a heartstroke ...... But yeah they made it, happy end .......this story is soooooo extraordinary special, you're sooooo magic in your art of writing and 11 pages made it a real tale ......... Congratulations and 5 stars are never enough 💖💖💖💖💖⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️💝💝💝💝💝🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🍀

Excellent.

Loved the way it worked! A real roller coaster, I honestly couldn't put it down, actually I could not got to bed until the end. It is really great that in this day and age great authors are still out there waiting to show the world what real talent is. Worthy of five stars any day. Lots of power to you and more stories for us, aren't we the lucky ones. Oh yes. xxx

Wow great story 500 stars

... I was disappointed when the first version of this ended so abruptly.

But then I saw this, and I offer my gratitude to you for it.

Extremely well written, with a depth to it that is sometimes lacking in stories on Lit.

A much appreciated, and very enjoyable read.

Five Stars and my thanks.

A highly enjoyable tale with well-rounded characters and an interesting plot and subplots. And also a nice continuation of Cady and Alex’s story.

The speed of the intro of the romance almost felt a little jarring at first, but it quickly fit seamlessly into the overall narrative. And of course we learnt later that there was a reason for the quick beginning.

Easily a five-star delight! 🙂

Great story, the only thing I was left wondering was about Maya’s family and any retribution that might come Gray and her business’s way, it was implied that the family had serious money (comment re Cupcake shop) and my experience of people like that is that they don’t take losing at all well and use both their money, influence and the law to bring about the result they want.

Otherwise pretty much on point, we had vivid, likeable characters, it didn’t bog down anywhere and kept us engaged and rooting for the happy couple. Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz. 5⭐️

Beautiful! Really looking forward to Charm's tale. Hope these two feature