All Comments on 'Maya's Story Ch. 03'

It is getting more lively. Cant wait for more. and more of her bushy armpits

I don't see this story going over well with the cuckold contingent here, but as for me, I'm lovin' it. The sight of this sniveling wimp watching his wife with a real man has been painted quite well, and thankfully the story is being told from the real man's POV for once. Bravo!

Well written, although I would appreciate more detail. Try to expound a bit more so we can see through the protaginest's eyes.

Keep writing

But men with their manhood intact never will.

My apologies to - "Wimps Love This Crap

05/15/08 by Anonymous

But men with their manhood intact never will."

Must have been the day you have to write the alimony check to the woman that everybody else in town is banging. Maybe if you're in a better frame of mind tomorrow you can actually read the story, or have somebody read it to you, so you can understand it. Congrats anyway on that intact manhood, "anonymous", as well as your insightful constructive criticism.

The plot line is dog shit and even JPB puts a little bit more character development into most of his stories. Better luck next time.

but I do appreciate you coming by and sniffing it :)