All Comments on 'McKinley Manor Pt. 03'

really enjoying your story. thought we might a bit more of his stepsis though .thank you

Their love for each other radiates throughout the story.

AS A RETIRED SENIOR EDITOR ITS A PRIVILEGE TO HAVE A STORY SUCH AS THIS TO COME ACROSS MY DESK. ALTHOUGH I HAVE NEVER EDITED EROTIC STORIES, HAD I, THIS WOULD BE ONE STORY AT THE TOP OF MY LIST. I HAVE A EDITORS MIND AND YOU HAVE FOR WRITING. SO MANY TIMES STOPPING TO REACH BACK INTO MY MEMORIES CACHE WITH SIMILARITIES. PLEASE TAKE THIS A CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. TRY IMAGINING YOUR LISTENING TO YOUR STORY BY A TEXT READER AND IMAGINE WHAT THIS SOUNDS LIKE,

"No...Stop...NO!" THIS IS WHAT IT SOUNDS LIKE, "NO DOT DOT DOT STOP DOT DOT DOT NO!" I WOULD SPANK MY SECRETARIES BUTT CHEEKS IF SHE PASSED THIS ALONG TO ME TO EDIT, lol I CAN'T WAIT FOR PART FOUR. i WISH THAT YOU COULD READ THIS TO ME INSTEAD. IT WOULD BE SO FREAKIN' HOT!

We need more of this story. It’s been over a year.

A very well written story. There should be more. Did she have a successful pregnancy? How does Rick cope with being a daddy/granddaddy? Will there be more? Will they have a 3some?

(12/21/2021) This was what I was afraid of. So many possibilities. So much potential. So many unanswered questions. It feels unfinished. Where are you, Stacy? It’s been four years.

I am sorry to say it in disagree with everyone who liked the story, this is total garbage.It doesn't make very much sense. Paragraphs are very poorly constructed and confusing. That is a shame because the prize of this could have been very good.