by x0DespicableMe0x
but only because im kept in suspense over why you cant have her and its driving me crazy ----i want to know please ?
Perhaps a quick grammar lesson: She and I
You don't speak as "me am going to......." do you? No....you would say "I am going......."
Thus using "me & her" shows your trailer-trash side!
Well...thanks grammar cop...but strike me down if im wrong...i dont write to please people with my grammar...i write to just please people...and trailer trash? really lol youve gotta be kidding me...dont yah think im a little bit above that? :P
Liked the sensuality at the beginning and was a tad sorry it switched so suddenly to physical sex. I thought you could have got even 'hotter' by taking the transition a bit more slowly.
Still a pretty impressive debut: congrats.
Screw the grammar cops, this fucking hot. Tell Her thank you! :)