All Comments on 'Me & Her'

by x0DespicableMe0x

Sort by:
  • 5 Comments
manpantsmanpantsalmost 13 years ago
i likes it a lot :)

but only because im kept in suspense over why you cant have her and its driving me crazy ----i want to know please ?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Me and her????

Perhaps a quick grammar lesson: She and I

You don't speak as "me am going to......." do you? No....you would say "I am going......."

Thus using "me & her" shows your trailer-trash side!

x0DespicableMe0xx0DespicableMe0xalmost 13 years agoAuthor
Thank You

Well...thanks grammar cop...but strike me down if im wrong...i dont write to please people with my grammar...i write to just please people...and trailer trash? really lol youve gotta be kidding me...dont yah think im a little bit above that? :P

elfin_odalisqueelfin_odalisquealmost 13 years ago
An unforgettable moniker!

Liked the sensuality at the beginning and was a tad sorry it switched so suddenly to physical sex. I thought you could have got even 'hotter' by taking the transition a bit more slowly.

Still a pretty impressive debut: congrats.

imharmless69imharmless69almost 13 years ago
This is fantastic

Screw the grammar cops, this fucking hot. Tell Her thank you! :)

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous