All Comments on 'Me, Boss's Wife and Daughter'

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jenna9090jenna9090over 13 years ago

Not entertaining to read. It is littered with grammatical errors. It is hard to read a story when words are missing and no periods or commas are in it. Clean it up and it promises to be an exciting read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Lacks details

Need more talks and details :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
lack of writing knowledge

Interesting! How can you suck on Rajni's boobs when she was sucking ur dick? LOL

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
so pathetic...

Pathetic story

mathur_nkmathur_nkover 6 years ago
Suggestion for improvement

In addition to all the comments by various readers, the boss should be dominating on subordinate, the wife should get attracted to young sub-ordinate before jumping on him, the boss should either punish the subordinate on being with wife or atleast be dominiating if he allows it. In that case, there should be athreesome. And why bring in daughter of boss who was 15 when subordinate starts and 18 when bell rings. Of course there can be an angle when daughter can be proposed to be married to subordinate so that mother can use him even after marriage.

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