by 7inchjunior
It's not a bad story, a little long on your lead in. Keep going, it might just work out for you........LAROC
but the story is a little wordy or perhaps strung out a bit.
I am interested in when he gets between his mother's legs, and I surely hope he knows how to suck pussy.
Thanks for the read.
you have a lot of good ideas but should write more directly about your feelings and actions. Using dialogue is not the best way to tell story
Great build up. Fantastic. Can't wait for the next instalment
Superb writing flair...the natural story telling way is what gives this otherwise typical incestuos-crush-like-affair a wonderful and rich aroma...too good....do not pay heed to some chipmunks here who could not follow the story....make your mother a lot more sexier...give attention to details like her dress,make-up,etc...ask her and make her show a lot more skin,make her wear high heels and one anklet....keep writing dude...gave you 5 star...hope you will continue the good work and never stop this story !! We all are hooked to it
i agree it is very good story. story which r long are good one and just one incidence of sex is not good, how they continue the relation after that is important & enjoyable to read. describe how your mom transform in her look, hairstyle, cloth in detail. hair coloring, hair styling, clothing, piercing any thing describe in detail also public appearances. best of luck. waiting for next chapter. hope it come soon.
I hope he marries her and they become a couple. There's nothing wrong with that. Incest romance is the best and should be a separate category.
I was intrigued by my mom's body since grade 2 or 3. When i grew up a bit i got the hots for her big time. She was in more than half of my jack-off fantasies.
thats really sexy. i wish to get such a mom and fuck her for rest of life.
making her pregnant and getting married to her.
what a sex party it would be to fuck....
For about 10 years following my 18th birthday, i was totally infatuated with my mom. I had the hots for her. I was dreaming about her. I probably was in love with her but i was not aware i had the feeling: she was the woman of my dreams and i loved her as my mother anyway.
More than anything else i LOVED her ass and her thighs. I loved her knees, thighs, ankles and feet too. Then her lips. Then her boobs. I admired how elegantly (& yes! sexy) she walked.
Hi 7inchjunior: Thx for this story!
Love this kind of story! Very disappointed it wasn't finished! I'm in love with Varsha already!!... Real Love and Respect for Mom is Paramount!!
I want story to continue sequel and Varsha to be pregnant with your baby in her belle.
was thinking about continuing the series - until i read below its done completed. too bad. i had a good start