All Comments on 'Me, Mom, & the NFL'

man this was hot write more chapters of this this is a good story

and at 37 he can still knock her up

Pathetic. Very unrealistic. First round NFL draft pick and all. At least make it sound real.

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Sorry! But I did not care for it AT ALL......

A great short story

This isn't your best writing, Larry - - 12" cock, no build up, just a one-page fuck story. You are one of the better writers on this site, and you are too good to stoop to this kind of B-effort. Please return to the Larry, the guy with the wonderful gift to be truly erotic.

First a 12" dick, I guess it's your dream, so, OK

Then your dick "stayed hard day and night", but it is limp when you start with Mom, but it was hard in the hallway?

And then you insert a limp 12" dick into a woman who hasn't had sex in eight years?

Gimme a Break!!!!

12 inches long 4 inches around. pencil dick, mom, & the nfl more like! LOL

Stories need to be REASONABLY probable.

This one isn't. You can do better.

Sorry keep it real 12 inches is impossible. 9 at a push for most can take 9