by Tio_Narratore
Enjoyed the story.
One thing you might add. At the end you mentioned that there was one woman in the bar watching. You could say, "Did you notice the woman? It was your Aunt Rose." Put that in instead of her line asking to be taken home.
FUNNY AS HELL. A WOMANS FAMOUS LAST WORDS "IT'S SO WRONG BUT IT FEELS SO GOOD" lol THE SAME FAMOUS WORDS OF MY EX THAT I DIVORCED. I'VE NEVER MET A FAITHFUL WOMAN THAT WOULDN'T CHEAT. IT WAS MY PASS TIME TO PROVE IT AND I DID BUT NOT WITH A MARRIED WOMAN!