All Comments on 'Meant to Happen Ch. 02'

Too rushed.

Could you expand on that a bit? I thought about rewriting the first part, where they split with their SOs, but is there more that needs work?

Hey great story so far. I wish his ex had cheated on him which would have made it more palatable as to why he was leaving her, as it is he seems as much to fault as her...but that's besides the point. You have left yourself some amazing opportunities with this story. Hopefully you can bring this story to a close

It just lacked a bit of setup from the previous relationships. They seemed to be treated as if they weren't important.

Otherwise, I'm enjoyin' this.

It just ends. The story is interesting, but it was written in 2014. When are you going to finish it?

Another incomplete story...

That's good for a third part.

It's been many years, but I'm preparing to return to the story. Stay tuned...