All Comments on 'Medusa: Fate's Game Ch. 05'

I love how sexy this story makes Medusa but I since I give zero fucks about all this story line hopping i.e. following a runt amazon villain . those parts have now earned a skip.

The last anon appears to be looking for a stroke story. There are plenty to choose from without throwing disparaging remarks about a story with an honest to god plot.

Please continue and know that I enjoy what you are producing and I thank you for posting it here for my enjoyment.

It's all good. Some people want a stroke story, and considering how long my sex scenes get, multiple strokes should be had! With that in mind, I know some readers will be annoyed with my 4 main characters and POV jumping. Can't please them all.

Five pages of practically nothing but angst and needlessly drawn out set up. Even the sex was boring. And the characters are honestly becoming less and less likable. I'll give the next chapter a final shot.

Another great chapter! Great plot, story, and sex. Very well done, sir! Only a couple minor misspelling, such as the second to the last paragraph. An easy 5-star.

This is a great story and love the characters. I just fast forward thru the sex scenes:)

This story is for adventure!

god plot, I like the characters, looking forward to the next part ...

How the hell does this story not have more engagement! It’s extremely well written in story telling, dialogue, pacing, character development, and much much more. Thanks for writing this!

You composed a great and it's amazing to read it.