All Comments on 'Medusa: Fate's Game Ch. 06'
by NovusAnimus
- 7 Comments
jpz007ahrenalmost 6 years agoMedusa's name has lived throughout the ages. And I am still so very glad to be not the only one that viewed the story "of a monster" as a bullshit excuse from those in power to punish a victim.
TheAnomaly666almost 6 years ago"And so, the three monsters moved forward."
loved that line. So much insight into how Darian currently views the world.
Jollygreen98almost 6 years agoGreat story, terrific character development, even know mythogy I find myseld eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!
Archangel_Malmost 6 years agoSuperlative tale, from first to last. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! :)
SkAoUtover 4 years agoI'm quite enjoying this tale of Greek tragedy. I did notice some disconnect from page 5-page 6. Page 5 ended with "...Revenge for my dead family, my dead sisters, my dead tribe, re-" and page 6 started with "I-" Pretty sure I missed something because it doesn't read very well. Other than that I AM really enjoying this fantastic story telling. Cheers
NovusAnimusover 4 years agoAuthorThat's a double interruption. Otrera was talking, and Darian interrupted her, only for her to interrupt him.
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